Orbits - Making Honey part 2

I decided to revert back to the lower hairline..but something isn't quite right..it feels awkward in some way..never mind, press on...

Now i've established the fringe and overall shading around the eyes, I still think there's something wrong. I decided that the problem is centered around the mouth. Cue finely chiseled eraser and careful erasing!

Redrawn and inked in, the new mouth and cheek outline looks good I think..I've also lowered her brow slightly..this shows you that even despite the many sketches i've made prior to executing the final image, I still rework things as I go along. I'm off to get my daughter from school now...I should manage a little more on this later...